rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
For me, poetry is an art form that allows the artist to combine both poetry and a visual work of art within a single art piece. Words and paintings are a perfect combination to provide a snapshot into our minds and thoughts. Would you please proofread my sentences and share what you imagine when you look at the painting? Any help would be appreciated. Here are the words and the painting.
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As a mountain river, bids farewell and vanishes beneath a pile of rocks. So I, too, will disappear under my burden of sorrow.
![20201218.jpg 20201218.jpg](https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/data/attachments/2/2968-9be46fcf81213aefc1e94f8f89f93fe2.jpg)
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As a mountain river, bids farewell and vanishes beneath a pile of rocks. So I, too, will disappear under my burden of sorrow.
![20201218.jpg 20201218.jpg](https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/data/attachments/2/2968-9be46fcf81213aefc1e94f8f89f93fe2.jpg)
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