unbridled liberty

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alpacinou

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Hello.

I'm writing a short story. In it, there is a narrow-minded man who is against liberty. Since he can't say flat out he is against "liberty", he tries to argue that he is opposed to uncontrolled liberty. Can I use the term "unbridled liberty"? What do you think about the sentence I have written?

The character: I believe you are all naive and idealistic. Make no mistake. I am not against liberty, I am against unbridled liberty. The kind of liberty that can be poisonous and harmful. There needs to be a certain degree of control.
 
What do you think about the small paragraph I wrote?
 
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