Marisol208
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Hello again! I´ve just finished this essay. If anyone had time to see it, it would be helpful for me. Sorry for the mistakes
TRAVELLING NARROWS OR BROADENS YOUR MIND?
Some people argue that travelling is one of the richest experiences which everybody should live. Other people claim that it is just a waste of time and money.
Regardless of the fact that taking a weak off has many advantages, it could mean to spend a large budget, especially if you are thinking of going abroad. You have to save enough money in order to pay the plane tickets, the accommodation, the food and different excursions. Moreover, you have to take into account that your national currency may have a different value for another country. Furthermore, if you had the misfortune of getting robbed or having an accident, it could mean the end of a happy holiday.
Among the positive aspects we could outline that travelling allows you to enter a state of deep relaxation. Taking a break and disconnecting from your stressful daily routines, problems and pressures of work, it is highly beneficial to your emotional and physical health. When you go on holiday, you can relax and do what you want without worrying about anything. What is more, it encourages you to reconnect with your loved ones as well as strengthen your relationships. Beside this, if you have the chance to go abroad, it will make you more open-minded. Meeting new cultures, sceneries, historical places not only will refresh your mind but also enhance your creativity. Apart from this, you will become more independent and self-confident as you cope with foreign situations.
All things considered, I am inclined to believe that travelling can bring you more benefits than problems. Finally, I would like to quote the following phrase: “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page”. Saint Augustine
TRAVELLING NARROWS OR BROADENS YOUR MIND?
Some people argue that travelling is one of the richest experiences which everybody should live. Other people claim that it is just a waste of time and money.
Regardless of the fact that taking a weak off has many advantages, it could mean to spend a large budget, especially if you are thinking of going abroad. You have to save enough money in order to pay the plane tickets, the accommodation, the food and different excursions. Moreover, you have to take into account that your national currency may have a different value for another country. Furthermore, if you had the misfortune of getting robbed or having an accident, it could mean the end of a happy holiday.
Among the positive aspects we could outline that travelling allows you to enter a state of deep relaxation. Taking a break and disconnecting from your stressful daily routines, problems and pressures of work, it is highly beneficial to your emotional and physical health. When you go on holiday, you can relax and do what you want without worrying about anything. What is more, it encourages you to reconnect with your loved ones as well as strengthen your relationships. Beside this, if you have the chance to go abroad, it will make you more open-minded. Meeting new cultures, sceneries, historical places not only will refresh your mind but also enhance your creativity. Apart from this, you will become more independent and self-confident as you cope with foreign situations.
All things considered, I am inclined to believe that travelling can bring you more benefits than problems. Finally, I would like to quote the following phrase: “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page”. Saint Augustine