rainous
Member
- Joined
- Jun 8, 2011
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Galician
- Home Country
- Armenia
- Current Location
- Antilles
My parents proposed that he and I open and run a Japanese restaurant together, mentioning the Japanese food cooking certificate I had.
Hi,
I am trying to insert the below sentence at the beginning of the sentence above after transforming it into a participle phrase .
"My parent couldn't stand my husband loafing around with no jobs for a long time."
Below is what I have provisionally settled for but I don't think the phrase accurately conveys the nuance of "the parents not being able to stand him"
Having seen my husband loafing around with no jobs for a long time,
Would there be better ideas?
Additionally, would there be a better substitute for "for a long time" which sounds a bit awkward in the sentence?
Thanks
Hi,
I am trying to insert the below sentence at the beginning of the sentence above after transforming it into a participle phrase .
"My parent couldn't stand my husband loafing around with no jobs for a long time."
Below is what I have provisionally settled for but I don't think the phrase accurately conveys the nuance of "the parents not being able to stand him"
Having seen my husband loafing around with no jobs for a long time,
Would there be better ideas?
Additionally, would there be a better substitute for "for a long time" which sounds a bit awkward in the sentence?
Thanks