alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
How can write about a situation when a person wants to say something but they don't say it?
Are these good?
1. "Why didn't you call me last night?" She looked at him blankly.
"Because I don't care about you anymore," she answered in her mind. "I was busy last night."
2. "Why didn't you call me last night?" She looked at him blankly.
"Because I don't care about you anymore," she almost said. "I was busy last night."
What other options do I have?
Are these good?
1. "Why didn't you call me last night?" She looked at him blankly.
"Because I don't care about you anymore," she answered in her mind. "I was busy last night."
2. "Why didn't you call me last night?" She looked at him blankly.
"Because I don't care about you anymore," she almost said. "I was busy last night."
What other options do I have?