to find cooler sea

[keannu]

[FONT=&#48148]The climate change has affected/influenced Koreans' dietary life/food life. With sea temperature rising, fishery resources have also changed. Pollacks and squids are Koreans' favorite fish, but we have to import them from Russia or Japan because they are moving north to find cooler sea.[/FONT]

Are the underlined correct?

 

[emsr2d2]

[STRIKE]The[/STRIKE] Climate change has affected/influenced Koreans' [STRIKE]dietary life/food life[/STRIKE] diet. With sea temperatures rising, fishery resources have also changed. [STRIKE]Pollacks[/STRIKE] Pollack and [STRIKE]squids[/STRIKE] squid are Koreans' favorite fish, but we have to import them from Russia or Japan because they are moving north to find cooler seas.

See above. I removed the underlining because it was getting confusing - most of my corrections are to other parts. I don't know what you mean by "fishery resources".

 

[tedmc]

How about:
With sea temperatures rising, the surrounding marine life which is a source of food, is much reduced/getting scarce.

 

[keannu]

See above. I removed the underlining because it was getting confusing - most of my corrections are to other parts. I don't know what you mean by "fishery resources".

1.Why do you omit "the" when it's specific?
2.Why can't "dietary life/food life" work?
3.Why are these singular when plural forms of nouns are normally used to show generalization?
Pollacks Pollack and squids squid