rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
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- China
Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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Gan didn’t lead his team blindly; he sent out scouts to check the area ahead as he usually would, as Lili had taught him. Gan also began teaching Bailian to be a scout. She was fast, but she was noisy, and a scout had to be not only as silent as possible but also had to be able to read the signs of the terrain. Bailian, Gan found, was a quick study, and Gan soon had her accompanying other scouts to learn more.
Jingying had decided to join her husband’s trek for a few reasons. The most important one was to save him from himself. She knew he would want to be upfront, scouting ahead etc. He wasn’t one to delegate when he could do something himself, but Gan was not a young man anymore, at least not physically. Gan had to learn to tell others what to do, and she would make sure that that was what he did.
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Gan didn’t lead his team blindly; he sent out scouts to check the area ahead as he usually would, as Lili had taught him. Gan also began teaching Bailian to be a scout. She was fast, but she was noisy, and a scout had to be not only as silent as possible but also had to be able to read the signs of the terrain. Bailian, Gan found, was a quick study, and Gan soon had her accompanying other scouts to learn more.
Jingying had decided to join her husband’s trek for a few reasons. The most important one was to save him from himself. She knew he would want to be upfront, scouting ahead etc. He wasn’t one to delegate when he could do something himself, but Gan was not a young man anymore, at least not physically. Gan had to learn to tell others what to do, and she would make sure that that was what he did.