rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
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- China
Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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The trip back to Jade Valley was uneventful. Bailian and Jingying collected saplings to take back to the Jade Valley. Bailian planned to put them in clay pots so that she could tend to them herself before planting them in the forest area. Also, they needed a little time to acclimatise. The others joined in to help, and they soon accumulated over two thousand tree saplings.
When they returned, Yang invited his parents and sister over for dinner, and the usual conversation ensued between bites of food. Yang said to his father, “Dad, I hear you have another student, Bailian.”
Gan replied, “Yes, she’s an amazing student, a fast learner.”
Lanhua said, “Better than Yang?”
Gan smiled, “Ohh, yes, much better. She can follow instructions precisely.” Everyone laughed. Gan had told many stories of Yang’s headstrong disobedience when he was younger.
Yang defended himself as he had many times before, almost word for word. “I didn’t disobey you, Father. I acted before you could say no. Besides, that disobedience saved Moogh.”
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The trip back to Jade Valley was uneventful. Bailian and Jingying collected saplings to take back to the Jade Valley. Bailian planned to put them in clay pots so that she could tend to them herself before planting them in the forest area. Also, they needed a little time to acclimatise. The others joined in to help, and they soon accumulated over two thousand tree saplings.
When they returned, Yang invited his parents and sister over for dinner, and the usual conversation ensued between bites of food. Yang said to his father, “Dad, I hear you have another student, Bailian.”
Gan replied, “Yes, she’s an amazing student, a fast learner.”
Lanhua said, “Better than Yang?”
Gan smiled, “Ohh, yes, much better. She can follow instructions precisely.” Everyone laughed. Gan had told many stories of Yang’s headstrong disobedience when he was younger.
Yang defended himself as he had many times before, almost word for word. “I didn’t disobey you, Father. I acted before you could say no. Besides, that disobedience saved Moogh.”