[General] Thread for inquiries

[Garam]

Dear all,


Hello. I hope this email finds you well.

I'm ____ from documentary bureau of ABC broadcast company in Korea.
I'm writing this email in the hope that we could go there and shoot the film of scarabaeus typhoon which we have been looking for.
We've heard there's scarabaeus living there in ______ National Park.
We're wondering the following questions.

1. Is it possible to see scarabaeus in person when we get there?
2. Which process has to be gone through beforehand in order to make the film there?
3. When is it possible to start shooting the film?

I've attached a link to one of our trailers for your information.
https://youtu.be


You may reach me at 1234567 and my Skype ID is _____.


I hope to hear from you soon.
Thank you!


Sincerely,
______

 

[teechar]

That trailer doesn't appear to be a documentary on dung beetles. :-?

 

[Garam]

That trailer doesn't appear to be a documentary on dung beetles. :-?

Yea. Haha~ becuase we have to go there and shoot the film in the future so we don't have trailer for dung beetles yet. That trailer is like our main trailer for introducing our program.
Thank you for your comment, but could you tell me there's some errors in my sentence?

 

[teechar]

[STRIKE]Dear all,


Hello. I hope this email finds you well. [/STRIKE]

Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm ____ from the documentaries bureau of the ABC Broadcasting Company in Korea.
I'm writing this email in the hope that we [STRIKE]could go there[/STRIKE] can visit ABC National Park and shoot [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] a film [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] about Scarabaeus typhon. [STRIKE]which we have been looking for.[/STRIKE]
We've heard there [STRIKE]'s[/STRIKE] are Scarabaeus beetles living [STRIKE]there[/STRIKE] in ______ National Park, and we'd be grateful if you could answer [STRIKE]We're wondering[/STRIKE] the following questions.

1. Is it possible to see Scarabaeus in person when we get there?
2. What is the procedure for obtaining permits [STRIKE]Which process has to be gone through beforehand in order[/STRIKE] to [STRIKE]make the[/STRIKE] film there?
3. When is it possible to start shooting the film?

I've attached a link to one of our trailers for your information.
https://youtu.be


You may reach me at 1234567 and my Skype ID is _____.


I hope to hear from you soon.
Thank you!


Sincerely,
______

.

 

[teechar]

[STRIKE]Yea. Haha~[/STRIKE] Yes, that's because we have to go there and shoot the film; [STRIKE]in the future so[/STRIKE] we don't have a trailer [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] about those dung beetles yet. That trailer is like our main trailer for introducing our program.
Thank you for your comment, but could you tell me if there are any [STRIKE]some[/STRIKE] errors in my text please? [STRIKE]sentence?[/STRIKE]

See above.
Let us know when the film is made. ;-)

 

[Garam]

See above.
Let us know when the film is made. ;-)

Of course I will! Thank you so much for your proof reading! It helped a lot!:-D