This is my Fiction Story

[alphasummers]

I need to know if this story sounds good.

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[Rover_KE]

You're welcome to the forum, alphasummers, but we discourage our members from clicking on unknown links, which may contain viruses.

You may post the text of your story here for us to look at. If it is lengthy, show us the first couple of paragraphs first so we can evaluate the standard of your English.