Thesis Check

[JayIvan]

Hi, I just wanted to ask a quick question, and I just need a quick answer for it as well. I wanted to know if this was a good thesis on an essay I made about the US and Iran Conflict, "With Iran’s nuclear capabilities, decreasing relationships, and rising tensions between the two countries, an Iranian nuclear bomb could have a major impact on both the society and the whole world." I'm not sure if this is allowed, but you can just say if it's good or bad, and I'll figure out what's the matter with it. Thanks!

 

[tedmc]

With Iran’s nuclear capabilities, decreasing relationships, and rising tensions between the two countries, an Iranian nuclear bomb could have a major impact on both the society and the whole world.

What do you mean by decreasing relationship?
Do you mean souring relationship?
What are the two countries?
A thesis on an essay? A thesis is a research report. An essay is a short piece of writing.