Silverobama
Key Member
- Joined
- Aug 8, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
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There have been so many home massage services provided online due to the recent crackdown of most massage parlors here; sex workers have come up with an alternative way to rake in money.
Context: There used to be many massage parlors in my city but recently, some new policies have been regulating the market so more and more sex workers who used to work in the parlors have lost their jobs. However, they now use the internet to find customers and the price is much higher that it used to be.
There have been so many home massage services provided online due to the recent crackdown of most massage parlors here; sex workers have come up with an alternative way to rake in money.
Context: There used to be many massage parlors in my city but recently, some new policies have been regulating the market so more and more sex workers who used to work in the parlors have lost their jobs. However, they now use the internet to find customers and the price is much higher that it used to be.
