rodgers white
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For me, poetry is an art form that allows the artist to combine both poetry and a visual work of art within a single art piece. Words and paintings are a perfect combination to provide a snapshot into our minds and thoughts. Would you please proofread my sentences and share what you imagine when you look at the painting? Any help would be appreciated. Here are the words and the painting.
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I know that I may not see tomorrow... But today at least, while the sun still sets, my tears are for you.
![20201216.jpg 20201216.jpg](https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/data/attachments/2/2962-988297cdc6172bd06e9e45d0fdc54771.jpg)
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PS: when I look at the painting, I don't know why I suddenly think of Eva Peron, a legendary figure in Argentine politics. Maybe the little girl in the painting reminds me of what Eva peron looked like when she was a little child.
![202012161.jpg 202012161.jpg](https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/data/attachments/2/2963-6edb39fdd060b36c64c8b64dc85684db.jpg)
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And as for fortune, and as for fame, I never invited them in. Though it seemed to the world they were all I desire. They are illusions. They're not the solutions they promise to be. The answer was here - All the time I love you and hope you love me. The truth is I never left you. All through my wild days, my mad existence, I kept my promise. Don't keep your distance.
Have I said too much? There's nothing more I can think of to say to you. But, all you have to do is look at me to know that every word is true!
Wow, these words are overwhelming me…
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I know that I may not see tomorrow... But today at least, while the sun still sets, my tears are for you.
![20201216.jpg 20201216.jpg](https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/data/attachments/2/2962-988297cdc6172bd06e9e45d0fdc54771.jpg)
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PS: when I look at the painting, I don't know why I suddenly think of Eva Peron, a legendary figure in Argentine politics. Maybe the little girl in the painting reminds me of what Eva peron looked like when she was a little child.
![202012161.jpg 202012161.jpg](https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/data/attachments/2/2963-6edb39fdd060b36c64c8b64dc85684db.jpg)
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And as for fortune, and as for fame, I never invited them in. Though it seemed to the world they were all I desire. They are illusions. They're not the solutions they promise to be. The answer was here - All the time I love you and hope you love me. The truth is I never left you. All through my wild days, my mad existence, I kept my promise. Don't keep your distance.
Have I said too much? There's nothing more I can think of to say to you. But, all you have to do is look at me to know that every word is true!
Wow, these words are overwhelming me…
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