raymondaliasapollyon
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- Taiwan
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Hi,
If the "it" refers to "the crazy gold in Camden," does it sound perfectly natural? Would its acceptability improve if "at a challenging but extremely fun course" were removed?
The crazy golf in Camden has been rebuilt recently and it awaits you to test your golfing abilities at a challenging but extremely fun course.
http://www.mumstheword.me/category/entertainment/
I'd appreciate your help.
If the "it" refers to "the crazy gold in Camden," does it sound perfectly natural? Would its acceptability improve if "at a challenging but extremely fun course" were removed?
The crazy golf in Camden has been rebuilt recently and it awaits you to test your golfing abilities at a challenging but extremely fun course.
http://www.mumstheword.me/category/entertainment/
I'd appreciate your help.
