alpacinou
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Hello.
I am trying to describe a situation when someone is looking at a river and also distant in the horizon he can see mountains.
I thought about it a lot and this is what I have now:
At night, he went for a walk along the river. As he stared at the flow of the river, a ghastly smell was wafting from the surface of the water. Out in the western horizon of the city, after the dim light of a ramshackle building, he could make out the dark outlines of a jagged mountain peak.
I know it can be made better.
I am trying to describe a situation when someone is looking at a river and also distant in the horizon he can see mountains.
I thought about it a lot and this is what I have now:
At night, he went for a walk along the river. As he stared at the flow of the river, a ghastly smell was wafting from the surface of the water. Out in the western horizon of the city, after the dim light of a ramshackle building, he could make out the dark outlines of a jagged mountain peak.
I know it can be made better.