Rachel Adams
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- Joined
- Nov 4, 2018
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
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- Georgia
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- Georgia
Should I use "the" before "news" in my sentences?
A: "I don't read the news. Today's news is all nerves, fear and anxiety. The news turned to noise. The louder it shouts the less sense it makes. News builds a crooked picture of the world. The conclusion is simple: don't read the news and live in peace."
I am not sure "noise" is correct. I wanted to use "gossip", "distorted" instead of "crooked" and I also wanted to add "about" in the second sentence. I also changed some words. Is version B correct?
B: "I don't read news. Today's news is all about fear and anxiety. The news turned into gossip. The louder it is the less sense it makes. News builds a distorted picture of the world. The solution is simple. Don't read the news and live in peace.
A: "I don't read the news. Today's news is all nerves, fear and anxiety. The news turned to noise. The louder it shouts the less sense it makes. News builds a crooked picture of the world. The conclusion is simple: don't read the news and live in peace."
I am not sure "noise" is correct. I wanted to use "gossip", "distorted" instead of "crooked" and I also wanted to add "about" in the second sentence. I also changed some words. Is version B correct?
B: "I don't read news. Today's news is all about fear and anxiety. The news turned into gossip. The louder it is the less sense it makes. News builds a distorted picture of the world. The solution is simple. Don't read the news and live in peace.