the first Monday

[Joseph ma]

The event will be held on: the first Monday of November, 2018.
The event will be held on the first Monday of November 2018.

Please tell me which one is grammatically correct?

 

[SoothingDave]

There is no comma between a month and a year. However, you cannot use "will be" to describe an event in the past.

 

[jutfrank]

Don't use the colon. The second sentence is written correctly.

 

[Joseph ma]

Don't use the colon. The second sentence is written correctly.

Thank you very much.

Can I check some other sentences here or should I create another thread?

 

[5jj]

New topics need new threads.