Economist2010
Member
- Joined
- Dec 22, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Egypt
- Current Location
- Egypt
Hi all,
I hope you are keeping well.
I have finally received the job offer. I have some concerns about it that I mentioned in my below e-mail on which I appreciate your help
" I initially welcome and convinced with your proposed offer and I am ambitious to join and provide the company with success story and milestones.
Before sharing my thoughts in details about the offer, there is something that we need to agree together that I have already been communicated by you the remunerations of a senior manager position based on which I made my calculations and accordingly I have submitted my initial notice to my current employer. Accordingly and since there was a change from your side in the title and the benefits, I hope that we can be flexible in negotiating the new offer and give me the closer salary & benefits to the initial senior manager offer.
The below are some minor and simple points that have been discussed / that have been gone through during the process that I am eager to be considered in the job offer. As follows:
1- As for the job title, it will be my pleasure to change it from "advisor" to " consultant" especially since it is perceived to be more wider and more leading than advisor.
2- As for my base salary and based on my research, I would like to propose moving it from 3 to 4 in line with the market rates for this position and the demands of this senior position.
3- As for the car allowance and since it has already been communicated to me that it would be 100 when you initially discussing the offer the senior manager role before it has been changed to "advisor" and since I already made my calculations based on what you communicated and accordingly I submit my notice, I would appreciate it to keep it as our initial agreement and to get the privilege of being provided a car by the company.
At the end, I would like to highlight that salary and benefits are my last concerns and priorities but the issue is that I made my calculations and was fully prepared that I will get a specific amount of money and benefits of a senior manager position. I am fully trust that you will do your best in offering me the closer remuneration.
I hope you are keeping well.
I have finally received the job offer. I have some concerns about it that I mentioned in my below e-mail on which I appreciate your help
" I initially welcome and convinced with your proposed offer and I am ambitious to join and provide the company with success story and milestones.
Before sharing my thoughts in details about the offer, there is something that we need to agree together that I have already been communicated by you the remunerations of a senior manager position based on which I made my calculations and accordingly I have submitted my initial notice to my current employer. Accordingly and since there was a change from your side in the title and the benefits, I hope that we can be flexible in negotiating the new offer and give me the closer salary & benefits to the initial senior manager offer.
The below are some minor and simple points that have been discussed / that have been gone through during the process that I am eager to be considered in the job offer. As follows:
1- As for the job title, it will be my pleasure to change it from "advisor" to " consultant" especially since it is perceived to be more wider and more leading than advisor.
2- As for my base salary and based on my research, I would like to propose moving it from 3 to 4 in line with the market rates for this position and the demands of this senior position.
3- As for the car allowance and since it has already been communicated to me that it would be 100 when you initially discussing the offer the senior manager role before it has been changed to "advisor" and since I already made my calculations based on what you communicated and accordingly I submit my notice, I would appreciate it to keep it as our initial agreement and to get the privilege of being provided a car by the company.
At the end, I would like to highlight that salary and benefits are my last concerns and priorities but the issue is that I made my calculations and was fully prepared that I will get a specific amount of money and benefits of a senior manager position. I am fully trust that you will do your best in offering me the closer remuneration.
