The door opened, shedding a corridor of light

[alpacinou]

I'm trying to describe a situation like this?



How can I?

The door opened, shedding a corridor of light onto the floor of the dark bedroom. A few seconds later, a stretched shadow appeared in the corridor of light and appeared to be moving closer.

I know it needs work!

 

[emsr2d2]

Alpacinoutd, you promised to limit yourself to five new threads per day. This is your seventh. I have closed it along with the sixth. Please do not test our patience. Your threads currently take up over 75% of the first two pages of this sub-section. We already warned you about flooding the forum. This is entirely unfair on our other users.