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A passenger at Schipol Airport in Amsterdam is tested for COVID-19 from a flight from South Africa after disembarking a flight from South Africa, where the Omicron SARS-CoV-2 variant was first reported.Credit: Pierre Crom/Getty
Source: Nature
The sentence above uses "a flight from South Africa" twice and it seems to me that the second "a flight from South Africa" can or should be removed, because "where the Omicron..." would still clearly refer back to South Africa after the removal (no one would mistakenly infer "where" to desembarking process). I am not absolutely sure.
Should the second "a flight from South Africa" be removed to make it terse?
Source: Nature
The sentence above uses "a flight from South Africa" twice and it seems to me that the second "a flight from South Africa" can or should be removed, because "where the Omicron..." would still clearly refer back to South Africa after the removal (no one would mistakenly infer "where" to desembarking process). I am not absolutely sure.
Should the second "a flight from South Africa" be removed to make it terse?