Tense

[Zoely]

Hi there,

I had to write an essay about a learning experience and now I'm struggling with the right tenses.
Could you please just give me a little advise or suggestions if I made mistakes?

Thank you.

 

[Zoely]

Is there no one out there who could help me?
Just a little comment would help me a lot.
Thanks.

 

[Raymott]

Is there no one out there who could help me?
Just a little comment would help me a lot.
Thanks.

We don't do homework here, Zoely. Isn't the person you had to write it for going to correct it?

 

[Zoely]

No, it's not for an English lesson, but thank you.:roll:

 

[CarloSsS]

Why don't you post your essay here?