take a rest on vacation

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[FONT=&#48148]Korean summer is famous for its hot temperature. The highest temperature is about 40 degrees Celsius. People go to beaches and mountains to take a rest on vacation in cool places. Autumn is the cool season changing toward winter. In Korea, the colors of mountains turn red and yellow because of the leaves changing colors.

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[Tarheel]

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It's hot in Korea in the summer. The temperature gets as high as 40 degrees Celsius (104 degrees Fahrenheit). People go to the beach or to the mountains on vacation.

 

[Tarheel]

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Autumn is the cool season, with summer changing to winter. In the mountains, red and yellow dominate the landscape because of the changing colors of the leaves.