[Grammar] summary of qualifications

[mamen]

Summary of Qualifications

§ Responsible and Hardworking
§ Active individual with the ability to get along with all levels of people
§ Computer proficient
§ Matured disposition; totally trustworthy in terms of discretion
§ Highly motivated to achieve set goals
§ Equally effective working independently and in cooperation with others

My Dear teachers,
Are the punctuation marks that I used correct? Was I able to use the proper wordings in writing qualifications? Should I write "mature disposition" or "matured disposition"?

 

[TheParser]

***** NOT A TEACHER *****

Hello, Mamen:

The teachers will be with you shortly (soon).

I just wanted to point out one "mistake" that immediately grabbed my attention.

Points 1, 3, 5, and 6 are adjectives (responsible, proficient, motivated, and effective).

Points 2 and 4 are nouns (individual and disposition).

May I most respectfully suggest that you may wish to make all of them either adjectives or nouns.


HAVE A NICE DAY!

 

[mamen]

***** NOT A TEACHER *****

Hello, Mamen:

The teachers will be with you shortly (soon).

I just wanted to point out one "mistake" that immediately grabbed my attention.

Points 1, 3, 5, and 6 are adjectives (responsible, proficient, motivated, and effective).

Points 2 and 4 are nouns (individual and disposition).

May I most respectfully suggest that you may wish to make all of them either adjectives or nouns.


HAVE A NICE DAY!

Thanks sir... but I really don't know how to restate 2 and 4 for them to become adjectives...

 

[Barb_D]

What adjective would you use to describe someone who can get along with all levels of people?

What adjective describes someone who has a mature disposition? Your other adjective is already in the second part of that phrase.

 

[mamen]

(a)What adjective would you use to describe someone who can get along with all levels of people?

(b)What adjective describes someone who has a mature disposition? Your other adjective is already in the second part of that phrase.

I guess MATURE encapsulates everything.

Maybe, "Mature with solid disposition and perspective." will do for both.

Thanks in advance.