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Hi, everyone. I wrote this sentence. I'm especially not sure if 'grow', 'dry' and 'cool' can be used like this or not.
The overview:
Overall, the production of sugar is a man-made process and contains seven linear processes, beginning with the growing of sugar canes and ending with the drying and cooling of sugar crystals.
The sixth step:
The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where it is being rotated to separate sugar crystals from it.
Does the two 'it' clearly refers to the syrup?
The overview:
Overall, the production of sugar is a man-made process and contains seven linear processes, beginning with the growing of sugar canes and ending with the drying and cooling of sugar crystals.
The sixth step:
The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where it is being rotated to separate sugar crystals from it.
Does the two 'it' clearly refers to the syrup?
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