meliss
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"Outside, I am aware of the sorry spectacle I present. Unlike my veteran countrymen, whose spear hands and smock fronts are lacquered like skilled workmen of the slaughterhouse, I am soaked from thigh to heel with alien blood and with my own, and with vomit, p*ss, and dirt. Lucas stanches my wound."
(The Afghan Campaign by Steven Pressfield)
Hi, the scene takes place after a massacre in an Afghan village. Are their spear hands (hand with spare in it?) and smock fronts are really coated with lacquer? or this is a metaphor? If so, what they are coated with? And just one more thing. It seems to me that something is wrong with this part of the sentence: whose spear hands and smock fronts are lacquered like skilled workmen of the slaughterhouse. Shouldn't it be for instance like: whose spear hands and smock fronts are lacquered like those of skilled workmen of the slaughterhouse? Thank you.
(The Afghan Campaign by Steven Pressfield)
Hi, the scene takes place after a massacre in an Afghan village. Are their spear hands (hand with spare in it?) and smock fronts are really coated with lacquer? or this is a metaphor? If so, what they are coated with? And just one more thing. It seems to me that something is wrong with this part of the sentence: whose spear hands and smock fronts are lacquered like skilled workmen of the slaughterhouse. Shouldn't it be for instance like: whose spear hands and smock fronts are lacquered like those of skilled workmen of the slaughterhouse? Thank you.
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