Fingerjazz
New member
- Joined
- Apr 3, 2011
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Ukraine
- Current Location
- Ukraine
Please check out my song lyrics and help me with grammar and style. Any help is highly appreciated. Thank you!
IN A GLOW
Every time you cross my way
I think about what I should say
And time
Is moving so slow
And when you smile, I drop my eyes,
I blame myself, I realize
That I’m
All in a glow.
But, unless you’re near,
I’m a ruined man
How I long to stand by you again
But you’re away, the moment’s gone
So here and now I’m all alone
Oh no,
I’m all in a glow.
I was careless the other day
Always doing well
Now I cannot find the way
To break your violent spell
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
Of love
No one ever was to melt
The coldness of my heart
Now that blaze I finally felt
Is too hot for a start
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
Of love
Can you read the poems in my head?
Can you hear my heartbeat?
Can you understand that I’ve got more
Than just a shame,
Than just a flush upon my cheeks?
Every time you cross my way
I think about what I should say
Oh no,
I’m all in a glow
IN A GLOW
Every time you cross my way
I think about what I should say
And time
Is moving so slow
And when you smile, I drop my eyes,
I blame myself, I realize
That I’m
All in a glow.
But, unless you’re near,
I’m a ruined man
How I long to stand by you again
But you’re away, the moment’s gone
So here and now I’m all alone
Oh no,
I’m all in a glow.
I was careless the other day
Always doing well
Now I cannot find the way
To break your violent spell
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
Of love
No one ever was to melt
The coldness of my heart
Now that blaze I finally felt
Is too hot for a start
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
I’m all in a glow
Of love
Can you read the poems in my head?
Can you hear my heartbeat?
Can you understand that I’ve got more
Than just a shame,
Than just a flush upon my cheeks?
Every time you cross my way
I think about what I should say
Oh no,
I’m all in a glow