[Grammar] Some correction

[themox]

Need Help from teachers
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Hello Teachers,


I've just finished my first children fiction, and am member of an online writers group. Professional said that my work is highly topical.

But I've some doubt if my descriptions small errors or not, so I need to post some descriptions parts out of the chapters. I've no problem in dialogues.

Would anyone help me.

Mike

 

[Barb_D]

Hi Mike,
Welcome to Using English.

Surely your writing group will do that for you? That's what they are there for.

You can post short paragraphs here, but don't try to post 1,000 words. People here are volunteers.