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[ben9108]

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I scrutinised and calculated the new system static head for the existing chilled water pump of air conditioner no.4. The new system static head (223.8kPa) was greater than the existing chilled water pump head (200kPa) about 10.62%. In addition, the cooling capacity (347KW) of existing air conditioner was less than the minimum sensible cooling load required (748KW) of the data center about 53.63% after shutting down all non-essential units in the center. From the above data, the existing air-cooled chiller no.4 cannot fully cater the cooling load demand of data centers in the building for a long time.

 

[teechar]

I scrutinised and calculated the new system static head for the existing chilled-water pump of air conditioner no. 4. The new system static head (223.8 kPa) was greater than that of the existing chilled-water pump head (200 kPa) by about 10.62%. In addition, the cooling capacity (347 KW) of the existing air conditioner was less than the minimum sensible cooling load required (748 KW) [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] for the data center by about 53.63%, after shutting down all non-essential units in the center. From the above data, the existing air-cooled chiller no. 4 cannot fully cater for the cooling load demand of those data centers [STRIKE]in the building[/STRIKE] for any extended period of [STRIKE]long[/STRIKE] time.

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