Shirayuki starts to live

[Gaya87]

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Shirayuki starts to live in the kingdom of Clarines. She is looking for a job as a herbalist but comes to know about court herbalists.

 

[teechar]

Shirayuki [STRIKE]starts[/STRIKE] goes to live in the kingdom of Clarines. She is looking for a job as a herbalist, but [STRIKE]comes to know about[/STRIKE] ends up getting into the world of court herbalists.

According to Wikipedia, Shirayuki becomes a court pharmacist, not a court herbalist.
Consider amending your text to read "... the world of court pharmacists."

 

[Gaya87]

According to Wikipedia, Shirayuki becomes a court pharmacist, not a court herbalist.
Consider amending your text to read "... the world of court pharmacists."

Noted Teechar, let me check on this!

 

[emsr2d2]

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Note my correction to the first part of your post.

 

[tedmc]

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