She was screaming pointlessly and hopelessly

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alpacinou

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Does this work?

The ship was sinking. A little girl was on the tilting deck, screaming hopelessly and pointlessly.
 
I don't think "pointlessly" works. Of course, screaming when a ship is sinking is pretty pointless but I don't think that needs to be pointed out. To be honest, the same goes for "hopelessly". I'd use something like "screaming in abject terror".
 
Both words make a kind of sense, but it's more likely that she was screaming helplessly.
 
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