"Via" is OK, but "on" is better suited to your sentence. The Guardian's sentence works well for a newspaper article.So in the sentence I gave, is only "on" [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] acceptable or does it [STRIKE]depends[/STRIKE] depend on the meaning?
"When security forces outside the store heard via the telephone that a shot was fired, they immediately stormed the supermarket and shot Lakdim dead".
No. It's a matter of appropriate usage. The article is telling the reader that the security forces heard about the incident by phone; someone told them that a shot had been fired.[STRIKE]Has it also[/STRIKE] Does it have to do with the style? Is "via" considered more formal?
The original sentence was published in an article in "The Guardian" and read: "When security forces outside the store heard via the telephone that a shot was fired, they immediately stormed the supermarket and shot Lakdim dead". I took this sentence and altered it.
So in the sentence I gave only "on" is acceptable or it depends on the meaning?
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