[General] She found a manicure job downtown

[Silverobama]

The following dialog was between Kris and I.

Kris: Silver, I heard that you cousin had came here from hometown.
Sil: Yeah. She stayed at my apartment for a month. A few days eailer, she found a manicure job downtown.

Is the italic sentence natural?

 

[GoesStation]

The following dialog was between Kris and [STRIKE]I[/STRIKE] me.

Kris: Silver, I heard that you cousin had came here from hometown.
Sil: Yeah. She stayed at my apartment for a month. A few days eailer, she found a manicure job downtown.

Is the italic sentence natural?

I don't like it. She found a job as a manicurist.

I've underlined problem areas for you to review. Please reply with corrections so I know I'm not wasting my time.

 

[tzfujimino]

I've found a typo - it should be manicurist.
I've also found this too:
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nail_technician

 

[kilroy65]

had come here

 

[probus]

had come here

Yes indeed. Also had found would be much better than just found.

 

[Silverobama]

I don't like it. She found a job as a manicurist.

I've underlined problem areas for you to review. Please reply with corrections so I know I'm not wasting my time.

No, again, you're not wasting your time, GS. There's something wrong with my broswers....

, I heard that your.....came here...(I'll leave out "from hometown).
...............A few days ago,.....

 

[Silverobama]

Is it natural to say "She's been learning manicure for a few months". If my cousin learned how to treat nails before doing that job?

Is my italic sentence natural?

 

[GoesStation]

I heard that your.....came here...(I'll leave out "from hometown).
...............A few days ago,.....

I was looking for I heard that your cousin had come here from her/his hometown.

 

[Silverobama]

I was looking for I heard that your cousin had come here from her/his hometown.

Much appreciated! Hmm, we are from the same hometown. So I didn't add any pronouns here.

Is there anyone who can help me with the sentence in #7?

 

[GoesStation]

Much appreciated! Hmm, we are from the same hometown. So I didn't add any pronouns here.

You have to tell the reader which home town you're talking about whether or not it's the same one for both of you. There's even a possessive pronoun that covers that situation.

 

[Silverobama]

You have to tell the reader which home town you're talking about whether or not it's the same one for both of you. There's even a possessive pronoun that covers that situation.

I got it! Much appreciated!

Is there anyone who would like to help me with the italic sentence in #7?

 

[Rover_KE]

Is it natural to say "She's been learning manicure for a few months", If my cousin has been learning how to treat nails before doing that job?

Is my italic sentence natural?

No.

She's been taking a manicure course.