sarahgamer
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Good evening, Everyone! I was looking at this sentence and would like to ask if my analysis is correct:
ORIGINAL SENTENCE: "Therefore, compared to the conventional method, this machine's measurement time is shorter and target inflation pressure is lower, maximizing patient comfort while preserving the accuracy of this important parameter."
MY ANALYSIS:
"Therefore, compared to the conventional method, this machine's measurement time (SUBJECT) is (VERB) faster (OBJECT) (INDEPENDENT CLAUSE#1),
and (CONJUNCTION to combine the two clauses) ITS target inflation pressure (SUBJECT) is (VERB) lower (OBJECT), maximizing patient comfort while preserving the accuracy of this important parameter (INDEPENDENT CLAUSE#2)."
Also, I'm confused and don't know what the functions of the following sentences are in the sentence:
> Therefore, compared to the conventional method; and
> Maximizing patient comfort while preserving the accuracy of this important parameter
Please help me! It would mean the world to me as I'm not a native English speaker. Thank you!
ORIGINAL SENTENCE: "Therefore, compared to the conventional method, this machine's measurement time is shorter and target inflation pressure is lower, maximizing patient comfort while preserving the accuracy of this important parameter."
MY ANALYSIS:
"Therefore, compared to the conventional method, this machine's measurement time (SUBJECT) is (VERB) faster (OBJECT) (INDEPENDENT CLAUSE#1),
and (CONJUNCTION to combine the two clauses) ITS target inflation pressure (SUBJECT) is (VERB) lower (OBJECT), maximizing patient comfort while preserving the accuracy of this important parameter (INDEPENDENT CLAUSE#2)."
Also, I'm confused and don't know what the functions of the following sentences are in the sentence:
> Therefore, compared to the conventional method; and
> Maximizing patient comfort while preserving the accuracy of this important parameter
Please help me! It would mean the world to me as I'm not a native English speaker. Thank you!
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