Sentence structure

[firefighter86]

Can anyone help me on this sentence...this sentence doesn't look right, I know I have to take some words out or change them around...

1. They would have to cross mountains that they had not even seen them yet.

I think I need to take out the second they and add ever been seen by them yet?

 

[ratóncolorao]

1. Can anyone help me on this sentence...this sentence doesn't look right, I know I have to take some words out or change them around...

1. They would have to cross mountains that they had not even seen them yet.

I think I need to take out the second they and add ever been seen by them yet?

What about.....
They would have to cross mountains never seen by them yet.? more dynamic and less repetitive.Excuse my audacity

 

[firefighter86]

Thank you...I'll try that.

 

[billmcd]

"They would have to cross mountains that they had not even seen." "Yet" is redundant.

 

[bhaisahab]

"They would have to cross mountains that they had not even seen." "Yet" is redundant.

I don't agree that "yet" is redundant, it has a different meaning without it.