How can I make changes to it?You've used the wrong narrative tense in the second clause.
Have you studied narrative tenses? Notice that your first clause uses a past tense verb phrase whereas your last clause uses a present tense verb phrase.
I came to the store and I saw the thief had been caught.I came to the store and I saw the thief has been caught.
You've used two past tense verbs and one present tense one. What change do you think you should make?
Yes.I came to the store and I saw the thief had been caught.
How about now?
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