[Essay] rule of law

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I aspire to be a successful lawyer in the future. I am an organized and analytical person whose strengths are in analyzing problems and advising others. I choose law because I want a job where I will contribute to upholding and enhancing the rule of law by striving for justice. Furthermore, being a lawyer will give me the opportunity to use the law to make someone’s life better. It is rewarding to pursue my goal with passion.

 

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I aspire to be a successful lawyer in the future. I am an organized and [STRIKE]analytical[/STRIKE] hardworking person whose strengths are [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] analyzing problems and providing useful and accurate advice. [STRIKE]advising others.[/STRIKE] I chose law because I want [STRIKE]a job where I will[/STRIKE] to be able to contribute to upholding and [STRIKE]enhancing[/STRIKE] promoting the rule of law by striving for justice. Furthermore, being a lawyer will give me the opportunity to use the law to make someone’s life better. It is rewarding to pursue my goal with passion.

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