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[mr_moh55555]

1- He starts his work at 9 a.m. and finishes at 9 a.m. next day . [ twenty-four
2- In Egypt , schools are open from September to May . [six-month
3- We played a video game from 2 to 4. [ hours

 

[mr_moh55555]

He has twenty-four hour work

In Egypt ,schools last for a six-month time.

We played a two –hour video game.

Are these right?

 

[bhaisahab]

He has twenty-four hour work

In Egypt ,schools last for a six-month time.

We played a two –hour video game.

Are these right?

He works 24 hours.
In Egypt, schools are open for six months.
3. Is more difficult, it could be "We played a video game for between 2 and 4 hours." or "We played a video game from 2 o'clock until 4 o'clock".

 

[mr_moh55555]

What about mine?

Are they correct?

 

[Trance Freak]

He works 24 hours.
In Egypt, schools are open for six months.
3. Is more difficult, it could be "We played a video game for between 2 and 4 hours." or "We played a video game from 2 o'clock until 4 o'clock".

Excuse me, but I thought that "a two-hour video game" was a video game that lasted 2 hours.
+ the 1st sentence lacks the article "a" and the hyphen.
He has a twenty-four-hour job.
For the rest, they are all correct.

 

[mmasny]

For the rest, they are all correct.

Except there should be no spaces before commas and one space after them.

 

[Trance Freak]

Except there should be no spaces before commas and one space after them.

I meant grammatically!
But thanks for the valuable information! :-|

 

[bhaisahab]

1- He starts his work at 9 a.m. and finishes at 9 a.m. next day . [ twenty-four
2- In Egypt , schools are open from September to May . [six-month
3- We played a video game from 2 to 4. [ hours

Excuse me, but I thought that "a two-hour video game" was a video game that lasted 2 hours.
+ the 1st sentence lacks the article "a" and the hyphen.
He has a twenty-four-hour job.
For the rest, they are all correct.

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