Resume Grammar

[katiekatekat]

Hi everyone, so I am working on my resume and I came across two problems:
1. this phrase:
- Excellent hospitality and food and beverage serving skills
2. this phrase:
- Well-versed in providing passengers or clients with constant attention and a safe and comfortable experience
I am not really sure about the phrasing/ word order/ verb use (in case of no.2)
Can you please tell me if they make sense? And if they don't how would you change them?
Thanks in advance.

 

[tedmc]

1. excellent food and beverage serving skills (F&B is a subset of hospitality)

2. experienced in providing premier/personalized customer services

not a teacher