Request letter

[poongodi]

Please correct my letter.
Dear Sir,
I was advised to undergo for a laproscopic surgery by the doctors from Vijay hospitals,Hosur.Therefore I Request you to grant me 15 days medical leave from 8th may onwards.

 

[emsr2d2]

Please correct my letter.

Dear Sir,

I [STRIKE]was[/STRIKE] have been advised to undergo [STRIKE]for a[/STRIKE] laproscopic surgery by the doctors [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] at Vijay Hospital, Hosur. (Space required after a full stop) Therefore, [STRIKE]I Request you to[/STRIKE] please grant me 15 days' medical leave [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] starting on 8th May. [STRIKE]onwards.[/STRIKE]

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