Reply to trees plantation work

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chowbarry

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Please help me improve the following reply to trees plantation work. Thank you.

We are sorry to inform you that there do have a compensatory trees movement work at our garden recently, planting 8 new trees (originally 52 new trees) at the garden to compensate proportion of 52 removed trees caused by a construction work at the nearby school.
However, even though there are currently 80 trees at the garden, there are still not spare spaces to accommodate your 60 trees plantation proposal.
Second, all your 55 trees are transplanted from other roadside areas and the transplantation works will inevitably affect the health and structural condition of those trees, which will prompt our maintenance concern about those trees in future.
Third, the trees species you chosen are not very suitable for a highly patronized area like our garden, considering those trees structure are relatively brittle and prone to insects and diseases attack, which may pose a threat to public safety. Also, as there is presence of a grand drainage beneath the floor of our garden, your mass trees plantation work may cause drainage maintenance problems in future considering the trees grow up.
Fourth, there is without an authorized path for vehicle access at our garden and so there will be particularly harder for you to apply buck vehicles to transfer and plant those trees there.
Last but not least, the mass trees plantation work destroys our long-term landscape design at our garden to a certain extent, which primarily aim to provide a grand lawn area with limited number of trees to our users.
In a nutshell, we trust that our garden is not an appropriate place for your proposed 60 trees plantation work and we can only consider to accept 10 trees from you after taking all the above factors into serious consideration. Hopefully, we will understand our position.
 
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We are sorry to inform you that there do have a compensatory trees movement work at our garden recently, planting 8 new trees (originally 52 new trees) at the garden to compensate proportion of 52 removed trees caused by a construction work at the nearby school.

apply buck vehicles to transfer and plant those trees there.

I don't understand the above. Rephrase it completely!
 
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