Reply For Good Bye letter

[letsrock]

Hi..evrybody...

one of my colleague is resigning is job and joining other company as better than this postion. today he send a good bye mail to everybody. so i like to reply him and like to wish him best of luck for his future ( i like to express my mixture feeling about his resignation..because he is really nice guy. he was in good postion but still he use to respect everybody. really i m going to missing his supervison in my job.)

please help me to write commandable reply for his good bye letter as soon as possible....

please check the below letter and rectify the mistakes:-

Goodbye,
I'm thanking you so much for all the help you provide for me, I've enjoyed working with you and will miss you. I’m really proud that, at least I worked with a nice person like you. I m sure we won’t get a better manger like you.
Really I don’t have mood to say you good bye, but its fact we have to say. If unknowingly I hurt (did any mistake) you really excuse me for that.
I wish you the best of luck in your new job, and hope that we can keep in touch.

 

[Rover_KE]

That's a beautiful, heartfelt and sincere letter, letsrock.

I say send it as it is.

It's a private and personal expression of your own thoughts and if I were your colleague I would appreciate it more than if I suspected it had been polished up by people like us.

Rover

 

[letsrock]

That's a beautiful, heartfelt and sincere letter, letsrock.

I say send it as it is.

It's a private and personal expression of your own thoughts and if I were your colleague I would appreciate it more than if I suspected it had been polished up by people like us.

Rover

are you sure i can forward this letter?

 

[5jj]

are you sure i can forward this letter?

YES.

There are some minor slips in the English, but nothing important. I agree with Rover's thoughts.

 

[strangerinmoscow]

What Rover said.^^^

Native speaker, but not a teacher.