Replacement of ATM card regarding

[poongodi]

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Dear sir/madam,
My ATM card has been damaged and it's not working properly.Hence I request you to issue me a fresh card for my personal usage.

 

[Rover_KE]

Dear sir/madam,

My ATM card (enclosed) has been damaged and is not working properly. [STRIKE]Hence I request you to issue me a fresh card for my personal usage.[/STRIKE] Please send a replacement.

Yours faithfully,

poongodi

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[teechar]

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