[Grammar] rephrasing a sentence

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I was wondering if you can help me rephrase the following sentence:
"People have created civil wars within their own cities, mostly by youths because certain individuals do not fit within the social perspectives that they perceive society."
 
I was wondering if you can help me rephrase the following sentence:
"People have created civil wars within their own cities, mostly by youths because certain individuals do not fit within the social perspectives that they perceive society."
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Good morning.

If I understand correctly, maybe you are seeking something like:

Virtual civil war has been created in many large cities because certain individuals, mostly youths, do not fit into the expectations of the dominate culture.

Have a nice day!
 
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