xikitaa
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Hi everyone,
I would need reproofing / enhancement regarding a short recommendation which should be written in perfect GB or US English.
In dark blue: he meant that where the employee really exceeded expectations was in her motivation to learn (or it could be that her motivation to learn helped her to exceed the team's expectation).
About the 2 bits below, could you please let me know if I can leave it this way or there is no way:
I have been supervising Y while working in the Z department of X.
Y was a resourceful colleague, quick to pick up the technicals of our activity.
Her input on analysis was always valuable.
She infinitely exceeded expectations regarding her motivation to learn, and proved to be self-sufficient within the team.
Y is a valuable person to work with and I would highly recommend her for any analyst position.
Thank you very much for your help!
I would need reproofing / enhancement regarding a short recommendation which should be written in perfect GB or US English.
In dark blue: he meant that where the employee really exceeded expectations was in her motivation to learn (or it could be that her motivation to learn helped her to exceed the team's expectation).
About the 2 bits below, could you please let me know if I can leave it this way or there is no way:
- quick to pick up the technicals of our activity
- She proved to be self-sufficient
I have been supervising Y while working in the Z department of X.
Y was a resourceful colleague, quick to pick up the technicals of our activity.
Her input on analysis was always valuable.
She infinitely exceeded expectations regarding her motivation to learn, and proved to be self-sufficient within the team.
Y is a valuable person to work with and I would highly recommend her for any analyst position.
Thank you very much for your help!
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