[General] recomandation letter

[hileo]

Dear Sir,

Please write for me a letter recommending child admission in school.

The letter should be written by an influential officer recommending his friend daughter to be admitted to one good school.

Please help

THANKS

 

[Tdol]

How can anyone who does not know the daughter possibly do that? There is no way to recommend a complete stranger for something, least of all when pretending to be someone else.

 

[emsr2d2]

[STRIKE]Dear Sir,[/STRIKE] Hello. ("Dear Sir" is OK when you're writing a formal letter to someone who's name you don't know but you do know they're male, but it's unnecessary and much too formal here.)

Please write [STRIKE]for me[/STRIKE] a letter for me, recommending a child's admission [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] to a school.

The letter should be written by an influential officer recommending that his friend's daughter [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] be admitted to [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] a good school.

Please help.

[STRIKE]THANKS[/STRIKE] Thanks.

Note my corrections above.

I echo Tdol's comments.