Re: She returned from the restroom

[alpacinou]

Re: She returned from the restroom

I would also appreciate it if you would let me know what you think about these two variations:

1.She returned from the restroom having refreshed her lipstick and applied her smokey eye shadow which complemented her thin eyebrows.

2. She returned from the restroom having refreshed her lipstick and drawn a cat eye which had made her eyes look a bit wider.

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: She returned from the restroom

I have moved this to its own thread as it no longer has anything to do with mascara, so didn't really fit with the previous thread.

 

[Tarheel]

Re: She returned from the restroom

They're OK. (I guess I'll have to look up "cat eye".)

 

[alpacinou]

Re: She returned from the restroom

I have moved this to its own thread as it no longer has anything to do with mascara, so didn't really fit with the previous thread.

What do you think about those two sentences?

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Re: She returned from the restroom

I would also appreciate it if you would let me know what you think about these two variations:

1.She returned from the restroom, having refreshed her lipstick and applied her smokey eye shadow, which complemented her thin eyebrows.

2. She returned from the restroom, having refreshed her lipstick and drawn cat's eyes, which [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] made her eyes look a bit wider.

We're assuming she has two eyes.

 

[alpacinou]

Re: She returned from the restroom

We're assuming she has two eyes.

I appreciate that Charlie.

What do you think about the sentences? I mean style-wise. Do you think they are too long or something like that?

 

[Tarheel]

Re: She returned from the restroom

Since you asked Charlie, I am going to hold my tongue.
;-)

(I am now going to look up "cat's eye".)


(Edited to note that the makeup is spelled "cat eye". (It has nothing to do with cats. ;-) ))

 

[alpacinou]

Re: She returned from the restroom

Since you asked Charlie, I am going to hold my tongue.
;-)

Please let me know what you think about it.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Re: She returned from the restroom

Please let me know what you think about it.

I'll bow to Tarheel's cosmetological expertise.

 

[Tarheel]

Re: She returned from the restroom

I'll bow to Tarheel's cosmetological expertise.

Expertise from googling "cats eye".
;-)

I agree with Charlie except for one minor thing.

:-D