Rate my pronunciation

[2014andon]

Hello! May I jump in and ask for a feedback in this thread, please? IMO my pronunciation is OK, but I need to learn to read better. Intonation needs to be worked on, some words dissapear when linked together, certain sounds need to be worked on (not sure exactly, which ones). And I'd appreciate a more general feedback too. Thanks!

 

[teechar]

Hello! May I jump in and ask for a feedback in this thread, please?

Hi, please start a new thread for unrelated questions. I have moved your post to a new thread. Note also that "feedback" is not countable.
"Life guard ...(unclear)". [ I think you're saying "Rob House"].

"His daughter ... (unclear).
New Zealand [ The stress should be on the "z" in "Zealand"].
You say "hitting ze (the) water with zier (their) tails". You repeat this mistake with other words..

 

[2014andon]

Thanks a lot!

 

[teechar]

Thanks a lot!

No worries at all. You're welcome to re-record the above or post a new recording, if you like. Try to make an effort to get the /ð/ sound right!
By the way, there's no need to write a post just to thank us. Clicking Thank/Like suffices.