Question about a formulation. Thanks for your help

[andouze]

Hello everyone !
I am not too sure about the following sentences. Could someone give me some directions
Cheers and thanks for your help



Part of my course includes an internship starting after July and I am strongly committed to do it for a Brazilian NGO.

Part of my course includes an internship starting after July which I am strongly committed to do within a Brazilian NGO

 

[2010]

Hello everyone !
I am not too sure about the following sentences. Could someone give me some directions
Cheers and thanks for your help



Part of my course includes an internship starting after July and I am strongly committed to do it for a Brazilian NGO. (correct)

Part of my course includes an internship starting after July which I am strongly committed to do within a Brazilian NGO

===Not a teacher===

The first one sounds okay to me.