[Grammar] Punctuations

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topman85

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Would you please help me correct any mistakes in punctuation?

At first this game will be released for Windows, Linux, Android, and IOS, but then also for PS4.
 
Why "at first" ? What follows after?

The game will first be released for Windows...?
 
Would you please [STRIKE]help me[/STRIKE] correct any mistakes in punctuation?

[STRIKE]At first[/STRIKE] This game will initially be released for Windows, Linux, Android, and IOS, [STRIKE]but then also[/STRIKE] and later for PS4.

See above. There was nothing wrong with the punctuation but I have changed the wording.
 
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