Prime Minister held a meeting with Ministers' of Housing

[Mona Ibrahim]

Please Check the below passage and let me know if the grammer, vocab is natural and ok easy to understand

Prime Minister held a meeting with Ministers' of Housing, Utilities and Urban Communities, Trade and Industry, and Social Solidity. That's to discuss the government's plan for providing housing and jobs for youth.

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

The Prime Minister held a meeting with the ministers of ....

And:

They discussed the government's plan for ....

 

[JenniePepper]

Not a teacher

Yeah, you should add 'the' before writing the Prime Minister.

 

[teechar]

Hello Mona, and welcome to the forum.
Also, "social solidity" is unnatural. What do you mean by it?

 

[teechar]

Yeah, Yes, you should add 'the' before writing the "Prime Minister".

Welcome to the forum, Jennie.
1- Note the corrections.
2- "Yeah" is casual and not always appropriate.
3- Tarheel had already covered that point.
4- Please add "Not a Teacher" to your posts. After 10 or 20 posts, you can add that line to your signature.

 

[emsr2d2]

4- Please add "Not a Teacher" to your posts. After 10 or 20 posts, you can add that line to your signature.

I hadn't seen your post when I added "Not a Teacher" to post #3 and notified the author of the reason.

 

[emsr2d2]

@Mona Ibrahim - you have hit "Report" twice, instead of "Reply". The reply button is over to the right of each response. Please try again.

 

[Mona Ibrahim]

@Mona Ibrahim - you have hit "Report" twice, instead of "Reply". The reply button is over to the right of each response. Please try again.

Thanks alot for your help and support, please check the above sentence and let me know your feedback

 

[Tarheel]

Thanks alot for your help and support, please check the above sentence and let me know your feedback

There is no sentence to check except for that one. So let's have a go at it.

First, I wish to enlist your support in reducing the use of "alot" (a nonword). Try Thank you or Thanks a bunch. Put a period (full stop) after support. Then say "Please offer corrections".

 

[emsr2d2]

Thanks alot a lot for your help and support. Please check the above sentence above and let me know your feedback fix any errors.

What sentence are you referring to? You quoted my response!

 

[Mona Ibrahim]

What sentence are you referring to? You quoted my response!

Here is the sentence :- The Prime Minister held a meeting with the Ministers of Housing, Utilities and Urban Communities, Trade and Industry, and Social Solidarity. And that's to discuss the government's plan for providing housing and jobs for youth.

 

[emsr2d2]

Here is the sentence :- The Prime Minister held a meeting with the Ministers of Housing, Utilities and Urban Communities, Trade and Industry, and Social Solidarity. And that's to discuss They discussed the government's plan for providing housing and jobs for youth.

In post #2, Tarheel already showed you that it should be two separate sentences, with the second beginning "They discussed".

 

[Mona Ibrahim]

In post #2, Tarheel already showed you that it should be two separate sentences, with the second beginning "They discussed".

Thanks for your feedback. I APPRECIATED

 

[emsr2d2]

I APPRECIATED appreciate it.

I don't know if you've misheard the words (in some accents, "appreciate it" could sound like "appreciated") but please note the correct construction. There was no reason to put "appreciate it" in capitals.

 

[probus]

Not a teacher

Yeah, you should add 'the' before writing the Prime Minister.

We are trying to teach English that learners at all levels can safely use in any context whatsoever, no matter how formal or informal. Therefore we don't use colloquialisms such as "yeah" on this site.